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1. Mikayla Smith
The essay had a good topic. It just needed more detail describing the friend. Better word choice and less repetitive words would make this even better.
09/29/14, 03:08 pm
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1. Mikayla Smith
The essay had a good topic. It just needed more detail describing the friend. Better word choice and less repetitive words would make this even better.
09/29/14, 03:08 pm